I used to hate
And sit with
My thoughts
I'm tortured
Wanting
To make
The world
A utopia
Because
What I want
Is something
Humans
Have yet to
Master
Lord
Take me
To a place
Where I can breathe
And not wonder
Who gets justice
Versus the cracks
...it will never be perfect, just try to make it better.
ReplyDeleteDearest Regine,
ReplyDeleteIf each of us does his/her share, the world will be better and we should not shut up because the media dictates us to...
Hugs,
Mariette
omg this is so powerful
ReplyDeleteAnd yeah, it will never be ok forever but you at least could try to make it better<3
Love
Very powerful and inspiring!
ReplyDeleteyes, i feel that too.
ReplyDeleteVery strong words. Hugs, Valerie
ReplyDeleteA great poem.
ReplyDeleteHave a nice weekend.
Hello
ReplyDeleteAt least you can make it better, we all can make it better. Take care, Enjoy your weekend!
God wants us to live an abundant life minus all the hate and wanting to take revenge. Surround our hate and angry to God and he will heal us and set us free from the torment.
ReplyDeleteThe world will always be imperfect, but we can make it better by loving others as Jesus loves us.
ReplyDeleteNice blog. I'm your follower #574. Follow back?
ReplyDeleteRegards.
Beautiful 😊
ReplyDeletebonito bravo bjs
ReplyDeleteI hope you have a good week.
ReplyDeletevery inspiring, continued success for you
ReplyDeleteUtopia.... It certainly means different things to different people. For me, it means a society that willingly bends to God's will and His way. I'm aware though that my interpretation of what such a life looks like varies from person to person. Have a wonderful Independence Day. I hope that it finds you healthy and happy.
ReplyDeleteIt's really beautiful! :)
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ReplyDeleteI feel this piece. Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteNancy ✨ exquisitely.me
It's true...there will always be strife since humans are imperfect.
ReplyDeleteOXOX
Jodie
Powerful words :)
ReplyDelete"Take me to a place where I can breathe." Very poignant.
ReplyDeleteThere are always news of the incidents caused by human follies that make us feel so sad. I’d like to believe that each and every one’s small kindnes, love, and courageous act will make the world better place.
ReplyDeleteThe only true peace is in His presence - we live in a fallen world and it is hard at times.
ReplyDeleteStay safe
Blessings
Maxine
Genius! :)
ReplyDeleteYes, so very sad that our beautiful world has become so blighted by man's greed and intolerance.😢
ReplyDeleteSadly, those small gestures of kindness are something of a rarity nowadays...
I love "Take me to a place where I can breathe"...it truly sums up how things have become, doesn't it...?
Such a beautiful and deeply moving poem.😊😊
Have a great weekend.
Hugs xxx
inspiring words...
ReplyDeleteHave a great weekend
Such a beautiful poem and prayer, very poetical. Your prayer is full of wisdom.
ReplyDeleteBem intenso... 👏
ReplyDeleteLove this so powerful!!
ReplyDeleteAmber - https://theunpredictedpage.com
Powerful words …
ReplyDeleteAll the best Jan
Your post is poignant and powerful. And I wish such a spot existed except in our hearts.
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