Tuesday, April 23, 2024

Ice

 The blades

Of the skate

Spray ice

Like flying 

Fairy dust

The punches

Black eyes

And melees

Pitting brawny men

Fighting over

A puck

Make hockey

So fun to see

Right now

12 comments:

  1. You really captured what was happening on the ice. Loved it. My SIL and Brother went to their first hockey game recently and thoroughly enjoyed it.

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  2. Well done. You walked is right through hockey.

    Have a fabulous day, Regine. ♥

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  3. Great imagery! You describe it so perfectly. :D

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  4. Yes, ice hockey sure is something, especially when you are there in person!

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  5. I love, love, love ice skating!

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  6. Very interesting minimalist word images, all combine to paint a vivid transitional moment.

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  7. I love how you've condensed the excitement of the game into such concise imagery.

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  8. I'm not a follower of hockey, but your words here sure make me feel the intensity of the game. Blessings!

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  9. Certainly an intense game, Regine, and you have captured it well - not only the intensity, but when one really looks at it, grown men tussling over a puck sounds a bit ludicrous, but then a lot of sports really are, when you boil it down to the bare bones! Well spoken
    Blessings
    Maxine

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