Sweaty
Messy hair
South Carolina
Hot or cold
Global warming
Poor circulation
The calloused toes
Could use a spa day
Podiatrist
Should be on speed dial
Scarred and callous
Memoir title
What say you
God
Any thoughts
The Master
I need your ok
Hot and cold
Sounds like my writing
Or like
Lukewarm
The symptom
That produces one more
I like this poem. It feels like a steam of authentic thoughts to me on s stressful day. Also reminds me of the hot days we had in the Fall in the Southern US just a few weeks ago.
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That produces one more”
Wow. That is a seriously strong ending. Powerful.
Much love xx🌹
ReplyDeleteAnother lovely poem, thanks for sharing!
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This poem has such wonderful images. Wonderful! Hugs-Erika
ReplyDeleteFeet bad, writing good...so did you want swap over?
ReplyDeleteThis feels like a "getting off your chest" poem. I can relate:)
ReplyDelete..getting it off your chest..:)
ReplyDeleteWe can all relate to much here. Well said!
ReplyDeletelovely, thanks for sharing
ReplyDeleteA poem steeped in reality!
ReplyDeleteI LOVE it and so relate! Podiatrist should be on speed dial. Indeed he should! Great title for a memoir.
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