Wednesday, November 6, 2019

Cold sweaty mess

Sweaty
Messy hair
South Carolina
Hot or cold
Global warming
Poor circulation
The calloused toes
Could use a spa day
Podiatrist
Should be on speed dial
Scarred and callous
Memoir title
What say you
God
Any thoughts
The Master
I need your ok
Hot and cold
Sounds like my writing
Or like
Lukewarm
The symptom
That produces one more

12 comments:

  1. I like this poem. It feels like a steam of authentic thoughts to me on s stressful day. Also reminds me of the hot days we had in the Fall in the Southern US just a few weeks ago.

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  2. “Lukewarm
    The symptom
    That produces one more”

    Wow. That is a seriously strong ending. Powerful.

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  3. Another lovely poem, thanks for sharing!
    Kisses, Paola.

    Expressyourself

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  4. This poem has such wonderful images. Wonderful! Hugs-Erika

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  5. Feet bad, writing good...so did you want swap over?

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  6. This feels like a "getting off your chest" poem. I can relate:)

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  7. ..getting it off your chest..:)

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  8. We can all relate to much here. Well said!

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  9. I LOVE it and so relate! Podiatrist should be on speed dial. Indeed he should! Great title for a memoir.

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